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comment by zebra2
zebra2  ·  4118 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Story club part XII

I briefly considered ending it with them running away as rifle rounds buzzed past their heads, but it seemed like a bit much. I'm curious to see where it goes.





thenewgreen  ·  4118 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Only in our amazing story would someone running away from rifle fire seem like "too much" but a large caribou army in a field is perfectly acceptable. -That's awesome.

Also, PM me your address again, I lost it. Have a postcard ready to send.