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humanodon  ·  4253 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: What is Your Favorite Poem?

I can't find some of my favorite poems that I'd like to share, but I have posted three of my favorites on hubski in the past.

One Train May Hide Another by Kenneth Koch Flight by James Tate Closing time at the Second Avenue Deli by Alan Dugan

I was also hoping to share another one of Koch's poems, The Art of Love but it's quite long and I can't find it posted online. It's long enough that I wouldn't care to type it out myself, but it's a great poem. If I had to make a list of poets who have most shaped my ideas on what poems should be like (and everyone who reads or writes poetry should develop their own ideas of what poetry should be) an unorganized list would have to be, Kenneth Koch and to some extent the other New York School poets, James Tate, C.P. Cavafy, Alan Dugan, Pablo Neruda and Bill Knott.

Anyway, here is one of my favorite Neruda poems, originally titled by Neruda Soneto XII Note: the English translation is taken from I Explain a Few Things edited by Ilan Stavans, 2007. I'm not sure who translated it.

    ‘Carnal Apple, Woman Filled, Burning Moon,’

    Carnal apple, Woman filled, burning moon,
    dark smell of seaweed, crush of mud and light,
    what secret knowledge is clasped between your pillars?
    What primal night does Man touch with his senses?
    Ay, Love is a journey through waters and stars,
    through suffocating air, sharp tempests of grain:
    Love is a war of lightning,
    and two bodies ruined by a single sweetness.
    Kiss by kiss I cover your tiny infinity,
    your margins, your rivers, your diminutive villages,
    and a genital fire, transformed by delight,
    slips through the narrow channels of blood
    to precipitate a nocturnal carnation,
    to be, and be nothing but light in the dark. 


    Soneto XII

    Plena mujer, manzana carnal, luna caliente,
    espeso aroma de algas, lodo y luz machacados,
    qué oscura claridad se abre entre tus columnas?
    Qué antigua noche el hombre toca con sus sentidos?

    Ay, amar es un viaje con agua y con estrellas,
    con aire ahogado y bruscas tempestades de harina:
    amar es un combate de relámpagos
    y dos cuerpos por una sola miel derrotados.

    Beso a beso recorro tu pequeño infinito,
    tus márgenes, tus ríos, tus pueblos diminutos,
    y el fuego genital transformado en delicia

    corre por los delgados caminos de la sangre
    hasta preciptitarse come un clavel nocturno,
    hasta ser y no ser sino un rayo en la sombre.




_refugee_  ·  4253 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Speaking of Neruda, this is one of my favorite poems by him. I have it memorized and hanging on my wall in my bedroom.

Love- Pablo Neruda

    What's wrong with you, with us, 
    what's happening to us? 
    Ah our love is a harsh cord 
    that binds us wounding us 
    and if we want 
    to leave our wound, 
    to separate, 
    it makes a new knot for us and condemns us 
    to drain our blood and burn together.
    
    What's wrong with you? I look at you 
    and I find nothing in you but two eyes 
    like all eyes, a mouth 
    lost among a thousand mouths that I have kissed, more beautiful, 
    a body just like those that have slipped 
    beneath my body without leaving any memory.
        
    And how empty you went through the world 
    like a wheat-colored jar 
    without air, without sound, without substance! 
    I vainly sought in you 
    depth for my arms 
    that dig, without cease, beneath the earth: 
    beneath your skin, beneath your eyes, 
    nothing, 
    beneath your double breast scarcely 
    raised 
    a current of crystalline order 
    that does not know why it flows singing. 
    Why, why, why, 
    my love, why?
humanodon  ·  4252 days ago  ·  link  ·  

That's a good one too!

On a darker note, did you see this? Neruda is being exhumed as there is suspicion of foul play in his death. I'm not sure why they're doing this at this particular time or what they hope to accomplish though.

_refugee_  ·  4250 days ago  ·  link  ·  

No, I hadn't. That's really cool/weird/interesting, thanks for sharing!