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flac  ·  110 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Ferrel Zebra by theNG (THIS NEEDS VOCALS) please add

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oxeXmkBifXtDHsaYLkZ1krTkhJkt7YZe/view?usp=sharing

Bumped the tempo up to 100, added a couple instruments and did some light re-arranging too. Nice groove!

Lyrics:

I see the water a-rising round you

Another flood I suppose

I know I'll sink like a stone, I'm bound to

It ain't the water that drowns you,

It's the weight of your clothes

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I feel a breeze slipping through my fingers

Fly like a murder of crows

You're long gone, but your spirits lingers

There ain't no words when I listen,

Just the wind and it blows.

That's just the way that it goes....

Let go...

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I was very tempted to layer in the "It goes" from this track into the build at the end:





thenewgreen  ·  110 days ago  ·  link  ·  

WOW! Very cool!! I dig the arrangement, the instrumentation and the theme. I'd love to see others take what you've made and add to it. ghostoffuffle I am sure you are extremely busy these days, doing the lords work but if you have time and recording gear, I hear some background vocal opportunities.

Great work, Flac! I dig the lyrics and I always love hearing your voice. Thank you very much for doing this. It brings me a TON of joy. Onward!

thenewgreen  ·  110 days ago  ·  link  ·  

lil ^^