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rezzeJ  ·  1679 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Write a poem in less than 3 minutes

I've never seen you that way before

beside me

broken

few words spoken

few words needed

I've never felt this way before

I feel my own pain for the loss

but rawer within me is the pain you feel

a second-hand grief





thenewgreen  ·  1679 days ago  ·  link  ·  

This hits hard. I’m sorry for your loss, rezzeJ. There are often no words at the end, yet much communicated.