yeah, totally agree about the punchlines. my writing partner and I struggle with that part, and I am hoping after a number of initial stories, that gets easier. It's hard, because the ideas we come up with are clever at the outset, it is just hard to put them in 6 panels and make it come out sounding genius. Well, if it wasn't hard to do, it wouldn't be worth doing. Thanks again for the feedback. Glad there are real humans out on the internet still. Even if you are almost a robot.