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brawlson  ·  2590 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Step 3 Comics - New Web Comic

Lol. What do you really think? I'm joking. That is great feedback. Thanks for taking the time to look through my comics. Thanks for liking the art style. hopefully I will get better at telling stories that have more of a point. I admit I am new at creating a narrative, and it takes some getting used to. If you ever want to send some more feedback my way, or if you have more specific comments, you can leave them on the site or email me at


Almost_A_Robot  ·  2590 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Also I look forward to seeing more of them around here.

Almost_A_Robot  ·  2590 days ago  ·  link  ·  

they are good don't get me wrong it's just that sometimes the punchlines fall flat.

brawlson  ·  2589 days ago  ·  link  ·  

yeah, totally agree about the punchlines. my writing partner and I struggle with that part, and I am hoping after a number of initial stories, that gets easier. It's hard, because the ideas we come up with are clever at the outset, it is just hard to put them in 6 panels and make it come out sounding genius. Well, if it wasn't hard to do, it wouldn't be worth doing. Thanks again for the feedback. Glad there are real humans out on the internet still. Even if you are almost a robot.