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comment by _refugee_

There's more than this and

always will be. Don't rush

after falling leaves.





user-inactivated  ·  3418 days ago  ·  link  ·  

    always will be. Don't rush

Isn't that six syllables?

thenewgreen  ·  3418 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Maybe "do not" instead of "don't."

user-inactivated  ·  3418 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I had to ask, since the way it's written, it will most of the times be read in a single syllable. Apparently, I am taking the matter of haiku - or, rather, the rules of it - seriously.

_refugee_  ·  3418 days ago  ·  link  ·  

No guys, I confess, I am tired enough that I have lost my Ability Count.

thenewgreen  ·  3418 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I'm with you, I would read it as one syllable. My comment was meant as a solution :)