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lil  ·  3904 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Ask Hubski: Hubski profiles... How could they be better?

That's the perspective of the narrator having to share his train car.

Here it is from a different perspective:

  We are on a train.  The kids
  and some guy over there
  scribbling in his notebook
  and the baby daddy - 
  I am not calling him
  A good-fer-nothing layabout
  though he rolls his eyes at me
  as I try to get the kids seated.
  Poor me.  Wisdom is not
  My currency:  I am running out 
  Of patience.
  And longing for peace.