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- Also, at this point in the story, it is night (night fell like, 3 times before lil edited it)
I thought we could use a different perspective than just Ashley's which is why I brought in Pak. I think their two experiences should be able to converge nicely. Excited to see where this heads. You are right, that is a lot of characters. Don't forget Daryl Houseman, we've only heard of him, but I guess it still counts.
Also, I don't think I conveyed this well, but my intention is that Pak is seeing Ashley run away from the chancellor in pursuit of her antler. Kind of a rewind showing the event from his perspective.