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user-inactivated  ·  2854 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: The first draft of the player's guide to my new world

I really like this. I think it's a nice touch in the various races, keeping them feeling both conventional and fresh at the same time. I be specially like your take on Goblins as an artificial race. If I could say one thing? Maybe add a few more paragraphs for each race. Maybe talk about how they interact with each other? For example, are there whole blood humans or orcs who resent the half orcs? If so, how does this resentment play out?