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Very nice. The whole scene felt very thick and tangible and I could definitely see every part of it. I liked the mixture of facts and feelings, using her memories to add depth to the space, though it never felt heavy handed. I debated if it would be better to start with the vast ground then make the sky even bigger in comparison, but I think it would work either way. And maybe expand on her in the shuttle a bit more, it was a quick gear change. But really it's a solid scene.