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user-inactivated  ·  3631 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Write SHORTER SENTENCES Dammit

For my sister indeed.

Although, sometimes my problem is that she sends messages to me that are too short. I had to coach her to not do things on FB messenger like:

    Ok so

    I was going to

    but

    then

    I wasn't sure

    like

    if it was worth it or not

    And so

    I decided

LITTLE SISTER THAT COULD HAVE BEEN ONE SENTENCE.

It's really just her going full on stream of consciousness. Told her to think about what words she wanted to use, and what she actually wants to say to me before she says it. She's much better bout it now...thankfully, haha.