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nowaypablo  ·  3615 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Quilt Story [OC] (Humor Me)

This is beautiful ref. I'm going to try to word this as best I can:

I think what catches my attention is you give "physical description," like an action

    He made French-press coffee from exotic, candy-flavored beans until she learned to like it

But the sentence itself offers so much more insight than just the action. Reading each and every sentence is like cracking open a little treasure box to see what's inside it, and simultaenously the story is developing at every step. Really enjoyable read. moar!