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humanodon  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Three Poems I Hang On My Walls

I don't have any poems on my wall, but I do have poems that kind of prop up the walls of the poetry space inside my brain. I've shared some of them here on hubski. I think we've talked about how I love Dean Young and Kenneth Koch, James Tate and Alan Dugan. One of my favorites though, is Dean Young's elegy for Kenneth Koch and the titular poem of Young's book, Elegy on Toy Piano.

  Elegy on Toy Piano
  BY DEAN YOUNG
  For Kenneth Koch

  You don't need a pony   
  to connect you to the unseeable   
  or an airplane to connect you to the sky.   

  Necessary it is to love to live   
  and there are many manuals   
  but in all important ways   
  one is on one's own.   

  You need not cut off your hand.   
  No need to eat a bouquet.   
  Your head becomes a peach pit.   
  Your tongue a honeycomb.   

  Necessary it is to live to love,   
  to charge into the burning tower   
  then charge back out   
  and necessary it is to die.   
  Even for the trees, even for the pony   
  connecting you to what can't be grasped.   

  The injured gazelle falls behind the   
  herd. One last wild enjambment.   

  Because of the sores in his mouth,   
  the great poet struggles with a dumpling.   
  His work has enlarged the world   
  but the world is about to stop including him.   
  He is the tower the world runs out of.   

  When something becomes ash,   
  there's nothing you can do to turn it back.   
  About this, even diamonds do not lie.
One might complain that Young is a surrealist and as such, does not deliver on that front in this poem. But for me, I like being familiar with Young's style and seeing the restrain involved in this poem and instead of the usual irreverence, reverence for whom I consider to be one of the great poets of the 20th century. It's a love poem in the way that elegies are love poems.

I don't know for sure why I love elegies, but it might just be that they're prayers that I can believe. An epitaph will fade in time and surely poems are forgotten, but that someone takes the time to construct a poem in order to snatch another person or thing out of time is to me, part of what poems are all about.

I've said before that I consider poems to be little machines, designed to perform small feats of magic. That poems exist on paper and the fact that someone took the time to arrange those words in a certain way so that the intangible object that is the poem, the poem as it exists in the mind, is to me a wonderful thing. It cannot be touched. Even if it is forgotten, it still exists somewhere in that in-between space between the page and memory, creation and oblivion.

I like to think that the space I'm talking about receives impressions of things said or made and that has an overall effect on whatever this is, no matter how small it may be. I don't really care if it's true or not. "Necessary it is to live to love" and "Necessary it is to love to live."





_refugee_  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I would like to feature your thoughts on poems in a future blog post. Maybe an informal pseudo-interview sort of thing. I really love your viewpoint of poems as little machines and would like to talk about it on the blog - best way is to get you in on it, instead of stealing and mangling your words.

I will PM/e-mail you as I think about how to structure this a bit more. But, you down?

Also, thank you for sharing this poem. I think I've read it before, but it is very lovely.

humanodon  ·  3890 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Yeah, I'm definitely down!