a thoughtful web.
Good ideas and conversation. No ads, no tracking.   Login or Take a Tour!
comment by easynow
easynow  ·  4524 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Short story
I liked the writing, good "stream of consciousness". Take care that you don't bottle up too much steve-o. Turn off your internal dialogue and try to focus intently on what you are doing at every given moment. Lathering? Focus on lathering as if it's the first time you've ever done it. Feel the shampoo on your scalp, the warm water. Be present. The dialogue in your mind that seems mundane and repetitive... probably is. Turn it off and be in the moment.

Good luck man.