It's not crap. It's quite catchy in places. I read somewhere once that beginning musicians have such a hard time because they're exquisitely trained to recognize what's good in music but yeoman at best at creating what's good and the dichotomy drives them bugshit. I say keep it up. Which is a lot better than what I wrote this morning, which was grumping about the title "vaporwave" which I hadn't heard until like two weeks ago yet I've owned every Com Truise album ever produced since they were new, owned Jan Hammer CDs and frickin' 40 years ago we called it krautrock and nobody got confused. Guess I'm still grumping. Sorry 'bout that. Old habits die hard.
This is actually a snapshot of an ongoing effort to sit down and record something every time I have a free afternoon to allow it. I’m not as cynical about the process as I might seem. I’m actually quite pleased with how it is progressing. Often times I’ll make something where there’s not even a semi-redeemable part in it. But even those nights are educational since I learn a particular setup or approach that is not a good way to make music. Like, last night I spent a few minutes literally spinning in alternating clockwise and counterclockwise circles trying to untangle myself from cables. Fixing issues like that goes a long way towards being able to just make music and not waste time fiddling with technical issues.
It's not crap. It's quite catchy in places. I read somewhere once that beginning musicians have such a hard time because they're exquisitely trained to recognize what's good in music but yeoman at best at creating what's good and the dichotomy drives them bugshit.
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Music is interesting if it is not too predictable, but predictable enough to be catchy. I'd say you are more on the unpredictable side, which is not necessarily bad but just my taste. However, your unpredictability is itself predictable, since you seem to throw a wrench in in the mix every 30 seconds or something like that. That's good for experimentation but not the best strategy if you want to know how to make better songs. How often do you listen to Boards of Canada? I feel like they absolutely nail this balance and it's a loosely related sound. Here's one, here's my fav album of theirs. I'd say give them a listen and see what you can learn. :)
That’s good insight. One of the artists that I’ve been into recently (who I just posted about in the other music thread) is Baths, and he throws a lot of unpredictable wrenches into his songs. After a while you start to realize there are specific motifs that get used over and over to create that unpredictability though. I think it’s really about developing certain things that work, outside the predictable set of musical tropes. Then, when the toolbox is big enough, you can throw in these well-refined motifs and not have it seem like you’re doing exactly that. Related comic I saw on reddit a couple minutes ago: Also I’m gonna check out that BoC album. I’ve listened to them a bit but haven’t found a good place to really dive in.
Whilst from one perspective what veen said isn't wrong , it's not definitive. There's plenty of incredible and interesting music that eschews the quality of 'catchiness' and the predicitable-but-not-too-predictable approach. That's not to mention forms such as electroacoustic/acousmatic music which are unbound from traditional notions of pitch, rhythm and instrumentation, which are all things we would would consider essential foundations to basically the entirety of western popular music forms. Instead they explore texture, sound gestures, and the transformation/processing of sound sources. Here's 4 different examples of unpredictable and un-catchy music from 4 different genres: Oneohtrix Point Never aka Daniel Lopatin, aka the pioneer of Vaporwave - Americans (experimental ambient) The Physics House Band - Abraxical Solapse (prog rock) Dennis Smalley - Wind Chimes (acoustmatic music) Doom Salad - Relax Drank (jazz fusion) As you can hopefully hear, all interesting pieces of music with great composition, musical moments, and ideas. Yet I don't think you would rush to call them 'catchy' or 'predictable'. The point is this: don't let anyone tell you what music should be. The only person who decides that is you. That's not to say that you should shut your ears to criticism or feedback. Of course you shouldn't. But personally I become wary when people start making definitive statements like "music is interesting if..." (not hating on you veen!). Aim to listen as much music as possible and seek to understand the works and ideas of those who you admire and/or are better than you. After some time (a lot of time) you will start to form your own conception of how catchy, predictable or <insert any other musical quality here> your music needs to be.
I think you're right too - it depends greatly on what you want to do with your music. My advice came directly from the book The Song Machine which is about the history of pop music. I figured that a good, reachable first goal would be to make a song that would be good enough to share on Facebook or something like that. Then, once you got the basics down, write songs that are unpredictable and explore new avenues.
I'm rolling up the sleeves on my suit jacket, slipping on my loafers and jumping in my convertible. This is great stuff man... the glitch beat (I don't know what to call it) at 0:52 is perfect. edit: i've listened to this six times in a row and it only gets better... edit edit: make that eight... can't stop won't stop