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veen  ·  316 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: I made a website explaining Ethereum transactions, what do you guys think of it?

ALRIGHT so I've been rewriting this thing from the ground up - your idea to make the EVM pivotal to explaining Ethereum is working out quite nicely. (I'm also rebuilding my website as a portfolio website :) )

I'll continue writing tomorrow and illustrations are done later, but if you or mk or anyone reading this already has some feedback, that would be appreciated.

kleinbl00  ·  316 days ago  ·  link  ·  

My feedback is it's a little proofreading from perfect. Little stuff: using words like "still" and "very" doesn't really help, it just deformalizes and denigrates the language and you can almost always do without. A couple typos. And I might TL;DR this:

    Ethereum is a generalised protocol for decentralized, secure transaction-based state-changing virtual machines.

In little words, "Ethereum is a set of rules for people or devices to exchange not just money, but data and ideas... without the need for any central authority to govern them" or something like that.