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War  ·  1488 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing With Refugee: Day 22

An infinite cosmos in her eyes.

A beautiful chaos crystallized.

She exists outside of time's domain,

but you will never hear me complain.

The English language cannot explain

how my love came like a hurricane.

Since then, these emotions have evolved,

Some were fleeting, and others resolved.

Ok I have to confess not all of this was written on the spot. Like one couplet was written 6 months or so ago, but it was really cool to take that couplet and see if I approached the moment with a different mindset. My feelings and my focus have definitely changed as time has passed, but remembering the moment I still get that sense of happiness.