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Isherwood  ·  3177 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: No dialogue

A nice little scene, I liked the atmosphere of the location. I think the characters could be fleshed out a little, but at it's core I could see what was happening.





Difference  ·  3177 days ago  ·  link  ·  

thank you for the feedback! I was going for brevity... but if I were to flesh out the characters more, what would you suggest?

Isherwood  ·  3177 days ago  ·  link  ·  

It's hard to say but motivations might be nice. A little more insight into who these two people are could provide an interesting juxtaposition of the breadth of life.