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comment by DaedalusInSicily
DaedalusInSicily  ·  1824 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: The Accountant & The Universe

I am not sure why but I get this The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock-ish feeling while reading your poem (it's got to be cause I am reading your poem and Eliot's side by side). I absolutely love it. There isn't anything verbose about it, IMHO. Would definitely love to read some more of your writings. Keep up the good work!

grizzly  ·  1823 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I can definitely see how you get that feeling. I had not noticed the similarity in styles until now--pretty sweet. But thank you very much! I look forward to posting more poems.