I'm not sure how I missed this, but I'm glad I caught it. I dig the electric guitar in the middle, good energy there. The rest of it sounds so fragile, it's like you could blow on the song and it would disappear. That's not a bad thing.
Thanks for giving it a listen! Any recommendations for improving it? In the end I want to rework the lyrics outside of the middle part of the song, and add some more guitar parts over what I have now (with a lot of feedbak/panning/anything else I can think of) to give it more of a textured sound.
I think I'm more suited towards writing stuff that is more slowcore than anything else.