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rezzeJ · 3607 days ago · link · · parent · post: Can you come up with the first line of a novel/story? ·
Your advice is valid and it's something I'll remember, but it's much harder to accept when presented arrogantly. I had to spend a minute or two resisting from defending some my attempts, even though I knew you were correct. I was tempted to ignore it at first. And I still felt the need to make this pointless response.
I was coming off a baseball argument with someone else and it leaked over. I knew it was happening but I couldn't really control ittttt it was terrible. Sorry. You were much fairer with me than I with you (though I wasn't talking about you specifically). That will definitely influence the dots. The dots are already beginning to speak... EDIT: I remembered there was an apology button.