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comment by jayfixkleenit
jayfixkleenit  ·  3729 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Chapter one of my novel

Thanks for your feedback. I get what you mean with both of your observations. I'll take a good hard look at my manuscript and see if I can combine what I had intended to do with the bits that you highlighted with your suggestions. Thanks for the link. I'll have a look.

Edit: I also seemed to have messed up a few double enters here and there.