First post, be gent[l]e. It needs a lot of work still, but every time I come back to it I just stare at it and don't really add anything. So I think it's time for some feedback. Plus I'd like to get thinking about some Russian background chatter from our resident Russian speakers (elizabeth, ???.) The current chatter I have in the middle is a place holder, It's cheeki breeki and "my hovercraft is full of eels".

So stuff I already want to work on:

not totally satisfied with the space the synths occupy

percussion in section 1 needs work

thinking about adding some progressions in the first section

overall the first section just needs stuff

latter section needs more ambient noodles

guitar work in the latter section? I'll probably scrap what's there already

EQing and stuff: it needs it. I'd like some input on what direction people think I should go though with various things

Anyways, there so much shit I want to change I should probably just stop listing it.

So the reptilian cosmonauts will have their day of musical glory. I'll make this a thing even if it takes me ages.