I need some help with lyrics! I was thinking how every part of the country tends to produce it's own flavor of music, and when I was thinking about how this damn slush makes it impossible to walk a dog, the seed of a song hit me. I think I've got a good chorus and first verse, not sure where else to go. (Also I immediately grabbed my guitar, I was playing along with a G# C#7 D#m Fm progression if anyone wants to fool around with it. Roughly 130 bpm tempo)

Slush

Dry December then January,

New Years heartbreak,

then February,

They all feel the same.

Grey on grey,

till all fades to black,

Steely skies don't cut me no slack

Chorus

I don't mind the cold

I don't mind the snow

I don't even mind the wind that blows,

(Beat) But this slush has got me down!

Keibler:

Got me fallin on the ground

But this slush has got me down,

Just wanna be up in the clouds. (That to finish chorus?)

March comes after February

Bringin spring and flowers

Its extraordinary

(Beat) Its extraordinary

(Chorus repeats)

Lol, never wrote lyrics before, just a 5 minute brainstorm haha


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