1) ditch the :8000
2) Fix the letter spacing issue
3) talk a little more about nonce because you say things will error out if you don't do it right but you don't really say what that is or why
4) That book you recommended (which I'm liking rather a lot) describes the Ethereum network as the EVM (Ethereum Virtual Machine) and I really want that to catch on because thinking of it as a big distributed mainframe makes shit hella clearer
5) post that shit to the Ethereum Facebook group because those guys are my favorite idiots at the moment
Nice work. I think it's great. I think you should polish this one up and then then do an annotated version that actually spits out the various calls in Solidity because it's not a particularly complicated language and the more people understand what's actually going on, the better the adoption. Also, the best way to learn something is to teach it.