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user-inactivated  ·  3429 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Kitchen Window

Very nice. I'd say this poem is above the average of what I usually find from amateur poets. Could be tweaked in a few spots to make it tighter, more vivid, but the foundation is quite nice. Well done.