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DaedalusInSicily  ·  1826 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: The Accountant & The Universe

I am not sure why but I get this The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock-ish feeling while reading your poem (it's got to be cause I am reading your poem and Eliot's side by side). I absolutely love it. There isn't anything verbose about it, IMHO. Would definitely love to read some more of your writings. Keep up the good work!